The Official Writing Challenge
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06/19/06
How brave of you to tell this testimony! And how blessed you are!

I think this might be even more compelling if you just told the "girl's" story, without the sermonizing between paragraphs. Expand on her, let your readers get to know her, and the lessons will come through the testimony.

Very, very good.
Thank you for your testimony. It's not what we have, but what we do with what we have that matters. Good job. Keep writing.