The Official Writing Challenge
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You wove a lovely thread, tracing abundance all through the Bible--thank you! Some quick suggestions: a double space between paragraphs (for the readers' eyes), avoid starting with definitions (there are more creative ways to "hook" your audience), and consider adding personal anecdotes or examples to really bring your message home.

You really nailed the theme, and with a charming simplicity.