The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
This is good stuff and I would like to read more of your work in the future. Just a suggestion - leave some paragraphs or white space for reading ease. :)
06/18/06
Very nice. I have to agree concerning the spacing. It would make for a much smoother read. This is a very common critique, especially at this level. Your doing well, keep writing.
Very good. Abundance isn't found in old cliche's, or spiritual dogma's. It's found close to home. Usually right under our noses.
I'm glad the Holy Spirit quickened your spirit for true abundance.
Keep writing. This was very good.