The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/05
I enjoyed it! It's very poetic and beautiful.
01/18/05
Your love for the Lord shines through and somehow makes the spelling mistakes less obvious.
01/19/05
good thoughts. I have found that unlike most things...the more you mature in the Lord, the more you realize how much you are totally dependent on Him for everything.
01/20/05
Your entry reads like a sonnet. Your choice of words has a nice effect. Pretty. Thanks for sharing it.
yeah, first entries could look like this, but the Holy Spirit really touches the heart of this one.
You made me think of our brother David, the psalmist. You have a heart which worships the Lord. God bless you.