The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for reminding us of the important lesson of God using all things in our lives to help us grow. All of us should stop and count our blessings even when they seem meager. Nice work. Thank you for sharing and God Bless!!!
06/18/06
Very nice story. One point that I may suggest is spacing between paragraphs. Large blocks of text can make it difficult to read smoothly. You want the reader to be able to focus and get the full depth of you message. Spacing is just one way to make following the message easier on the eyes of the reader. Well done. You have a lot of warmth in your writing.