The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
"I had the wisdom of God all over me" (instant smile!) Reminds me of Zooey in It's a Wonderful Life. Beautiful little anecdote. Great title. More.
I love how children view God's word. Sometimes I think we all need to be more like that. Very lovely.
Very nice. One little critique. Weld is welled. Other than that this is a wonderful piece. We never know what our children are listening to when we try to teach them about God.
06/18/06
I love kids, I a Grandpa what can I say. This is very nice. One thing that I would suggest is line spacing between the paragraphs and in between each line of dialog. It would make the reading much smoother. Well done. Continue writing.
06/19/06
This is a precious piece with a valuable lesson. It's an awesome feeling when our kids or grandkids put God's Word into practice. Thanks for sharing this sweet story.