The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely tribute to Mother. Nicely written.
06/16/06
This was a lovely piece. Well written. What a nice idea; I think I'll try reciting Ps. 23 before falling asleep tonight. Keep writing!
Lovely sketch here! Mother's godliness wraps around the reader like soft blanket; your use of her nighttime prayer to highlight the beautiful truths of Psalm 23 works beautifully.

You show solid writing skill and a mature voice; a Level 1 entrant who could well compete at a higher level if be you choose! Your structure is tight, one train of thought building into the next. Your present tense is nailed right down! Your power of description, your flow, your engaging of the reader, all very, very good! Keep on!
06/17/06
"She says she never gets through these precious words twice before sweet sleep covers her like a warm blanket." Peace doesn't come any sweeter than this. Your have such warmth in your writing. Thank you.
06/21/06
This is beautiful - a wonderful tribute to a woman you obviously love AND admire. Good work.