The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good. Death is a hard topic to deal with, and even harder for family that is left behind. You did a good job in bringing the depth of emotion into the forefront. I could easily see what you tried to convey. keep writing and sharing.
Nicely written. Thankyou for a beautiful account of a stong family fully dependent upon the Lord.
06/16/06
This was a heart-warming piece, full of the love of family for each other. I would "tighten it up" by sparing a few of the adjectives and adverbs. Nice job!
06/16/06
Wonderful story holding back the dark clouds of death. No need for me to critique other areas already mentioned. Good job.