The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
Very nice - this has the marks of a winner. Let's see if the judges agree. Flows well and has a good analogy to shopping. :)
06/08/06
I loved the pregression from personal God all the way to personal peace. Great job.
Joyce
06/10/06
This was really creative--and oh so true! I enjoyed this. It kept my attention from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.
06/12/06
I really enjoyed this piece. Very creative. Thanks.
06/12/06
Nice topic handling. Remember to paragraph with each piece of dialogue. This is a fine effort, keep writing.
06/14/06
Really good! This is creative and well written. Remembering to start a new paragraph each time someone new speaks will help this to flow even better. I loved your title too!