The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/06
Unique and very creative - I liked it! It says it like it is - and represents the Topic of Personal Peace extremely well! Good Job!
06/12/06
Very nice. Has a good sound to it when read aloud. :)
06/12/06
This is really neat, there is a poetic trick you could do with this fine poem, think about shapes - especially the first stanza almost does it for you. Good emotion throughout.