The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this!! It's cool to hear the 'rest' of the story.
06/08/06
Nice retelling of this. Well written, flows well. :)
06/10/06
Fantastic read by a very creative writer! I have only one suggestion - reference the scripture that this story is based on for those who do not know of this Bible Story. A Great Job, well done!
06/15/06
Vicki, you did a wonderful job with this piece. You choose the perfect ending to sum up the feeling of peace. I loved it! Thanks for writing it. :)