The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/06
Quite a journey here. Lots of issues mentioned. Good to see the main character finally decided to give God a chance to help him. You might want to give more attention to editting your next work. Helps the reader get the message more clearly.
06/12/06
A long journey in a few words. Nicely done, although too quick but must be to stay within the word limits. Nice to know that God's word stays hidden in our hearts until we need it. :)