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06/10/06
I enjoy good biblical fiction. You've perfectly captured the uncertainty of the moment, in spite of the hopeful news that Jesus was alive. Good job!
06/12/06
Very well done and gives a visual to a Biblical fact. I would suggest you change "and so couldn’t John" to "neither could John" for grammatical flow. Thanks for writing this. :)