The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
Great job! I loved the way you didn't expose this being a dream until the end. Keep writing for Jesus, you are good. In Christ's Love,

Julia
06/12/06
Very good. I thought this was taking place in the battlefield -- but wait, we live in a daily spiritual battlefield, don't we? Nicely done - good talent here.
06/12/06
A foxhole conversion in reverse - interesting creative approach. Oh, Reveille (note spelling) is usually proceded by first call (also heard at horse races).
06/14/06
You have a masterful story, here! It gives a realistic, "you are there" feeling. The transition in Brand's thinking is also believable, not contrived. The message unfolds naturally and makes connection in the reader's mind. Nice work--God bless your writing for His glory!