The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
Finally! I am reading something that I really enjoyed. This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. In Christ's love,

Julia
06/10/06
Just reading this poem brought me such peace...a great way to depict the topic of Peace! From beginning to end...it flowed naturally and yes, peacefully. Great job!
06/11/06
Refreshingly beautiful! Well-crafted with words that create a tapestry of peace! Thank you! :)
06/12/06
This reminds me very much of something that would appear on the pages of Ideals magazine, complete with a beautiful nature photograph.
06/12/06
Matched couplets - very well done.
06/14/06
This was a wonderful read! One tiny error: the dove you mentioned is actually spelled "mourning". But that didn't detract from the lyrical feel of this piece. Great job!
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
06/17/06
Anna,
I enjoyed reading your poem, because I have experienced many of the descriptions you used. You captured the essence of the various scenes of nature. Well done!