The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
06/11/06
Interesting thoughts on peace. I would be a little careful with your sentence structure, but for sure you got your point across. Thanks for sharing! :)
I agree with Jan and if you could add white space that would be great.

Blessings as you continue with your writing. May the Lord guide your pen.

Trina