The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
06/08/06
Good job - I was with you all the way.
Very good. You have a way of bringing us right with you. Showing us all those things that were so much a part of yesterday, and really have no place in the fast pace of today with all our gizmos and gadgets we can't seem to live without. Keep writing and sharing.
Very well done. You captured the spirit of both times. Smooth flow.
Flash back to an era I would've loved to live in. Nice job bringing it to life.

One small critique, some small typo's.

Keep writing and may God bless your work.

Trina
06/14/06
"Community happened." How nice. Don't we all long for those times. I liked how you expressed your experience: "It took root in my heart." Thanks for sharing.