The Official Writing Challenge
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The story shows a good picture of sibling rivalry. However I was confused by your last line and wonder how it fit with the rest of your story.
It is always good to spell check and read over your article first before submitting.
Interesting take on the wild brothers so well known from the Old Testament, watching them play as boys. Very well done. A little spacing between paragraphs would make it easier to read, however.
Very imaginative! Including the last sentence--although it could probably be clarified somewhat, I thought it "made" the story.