The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a nice devotional style, and your written expression is clear. I'd like to see this excellent theme developed and clarified more. For instance, can you illustrate what you mean by forgiving "flippantly?" I was a little unclear on that.

Then in your final paragraph I was left wondering why someone who is determined to forgive (a righteous attitude) needs to have a repentant heart.

I'm so glad you did careful research on the value of the debt that was forgiven! I'm sure that with some more careful thought, you can make your case rock solid. Blessings and keep on writing!
06/07/06
Forgiveness is such an essential quality, I really appreciate your addressing it here, as you did. You have demonstrated in a meaningful way the contrast between the magnitude of what God has forgiven us, and the little we are called on to forgive.

God bless your writing!