The Official Writing Challenge
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An inspiring victory! And oh, how I identify, having been in both ministry and the workplace!

You write very, very well... I'm thinking the overall energy of this piece could be cranked up a few notches if you ever decided to tell it in the first person. Visions, especially, seem to have extra punch when related as personal experience.

Be that as it may, this is a precious story of surrender, a real blessing!

06/07/06
Good writing, powerful message, I can identify with your narrator (as I imagine most of us can do)! Why this and not that, Lord? You have done a great job showing us what we can miss, right in front of us, if we are too "farsighted" without God's perspective!
Very good, encouraging article. We need to learn to be content with our lives, because, even if we can't see it, God has a purpose.