The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
Great thoughts here and good creative writing.

It would help the reader if each 'scene' was separated from the next, maybe with centered asterisks.

You might try putting the repeated phrase "I will fulfill My purpose in you..." (which I LOVE, by the way) in italics to set it off.

If you don't know how to center or italicize in a .txt document, send me a pm or ask how on the message boards.

Again, great thoughts!
Wonderful. Inner fears, filled with God's promise. Keep writing, you have a way with words that draw pictures and us into your story.
06/08/06
i can't believe his didn't pace! and how dare that church tell her not sing for the kids!