The Official Writing Challenge
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How very special to have a gift and purpose to minister to others this way.
Thanks for the picture of a delightful lady! Methinks you might know her personally, perhaps? ;)

Your heart for people shines through here--why not revamp this piece to involve the reader more, rather than explaining to them all about Bella?

You could create dialogue between Bella and the attendants, or a special friend, hinting at her mindset and values. You could craft a scene and show us her facial expressions, posture, body movements.

You've got the start of something precious here. Now have fun bringing it to life! Blessings on your gift.