The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
This is a well-written story, with great grammar and organization.

I also liked the thematic use of imagery: path, avenue, walking, rolling, etc.

You might want to consider starting with the sentence about sitting in a dark room alone, thinking about his future and his purpose in life.

Good work, and good take on the topic from a youthful perspective!