The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
If you re-work this, you might want to move this to the end:

It is from my personal experience of a life without Jesus that I can speak freely, knowing that it is empty and pointless. But truly, when the Son comes in, it is bright and shiny. [That's why] now, with careful consideration, [I] write with a vengeance sometimes, for [this] very purpose: to give hope to the hurting and help heal the broken hearted.


So glad to hear that God has made a real difference in your life. May you continue to grow in Him.

06/06/06
You did a good job of relating your father's love to our heavenly Father's love. You have a testimony that will touch many hearts. Keep writing.

Blessings
Joyce