The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
You stated near the beginning that you had a problem with trust, then used an example of why later--that's a good example of "show, don't tell."

You don't need to have 'but' and 'yet' together; use only one of them.

Keep writing for the Lord and sharpening your skills for Him!
06/03/06
Heart-touching! The touch of the Master's hand, reaches us where no one else can! Thanks for sharing this story!
06/06/06
Opening up and sharing your heart and past is never easy. Good example with Linda and John. Continue to allow the Lord to use you to minister to others through your past and His grace and love He has shown to you.
Blessings
Joyce