The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
This is really good--well organized and thought out.

Your writing style is clear and good, and you got your point across without banging people over the head with or being preachy.

You've got a few shifts out of the present tense, and I think you meant 'until' instead of 'unto' in the last sentence.

Overall, though, this is a good entry--good job!
06/03/06
Good job! Inspirational!
I like this take on being a disciple of Jesus, and a woman. You did a good job, overall it was well done. Keep writing and sharing. Thank you.
06/04/06
Beautiful, first person account of a discipile of our Lord. Thank you for sharing.
06/08/06
Wow, Patty! You drew me right into this woman and her feelings. I loved the way you 'told' the story of this devotee. Keep up the great work. God bless.