The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting way to present the scriptures in the last part, but maybe putting the references in paranthases? I like the end, Jesus, Others and You :) A little polish and this would do well as a devotional.
I like "personal" writing, where you include your own experience. This rings truer than just general admonition of an impersonal nature (boring!). You demonstrate, here, that you write what you know, which also has impact. My only suggestion would be to begin with more of a story, like a parable from your life, to hook your readers' interest and draw them in. God bless your writing!
wonderful message. This is a great devotional for everyone to read. Awesome!