The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Very clever! I really enjoyed this! I especially liked the "fickle and thin" line.
05/26/06
This was really good -something everyone can relate to. A nice free-verse poem.
05/27/06
I am thankful His joy is new every morning. Great job! I like the comparison of 'human joy' to 'His joy.'
05/30/06
This is just what I needed to read today. Very nice!