The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story. Well done.
Loved it! I knew she'd be doing something at the end, to embarase him, but it would work to his advantage, but wasn't sure what it would be. Great!
Well written, I like the use of his tie to show the intensity of his feelings. Great job!
You definitely know how to spin an enjoyable yarn! This is a delightful piece of writing, creatively and technically, and you are certainly destined for higher levels. Thank you!
Congratulations, Emma! I'm glad to see your entry up in lights!
Congratulations, Emma, on your win! What a delightful story. I could hear June and her marching band and smiled as I saw the fun through the eyes of the children. Great job!
This was wonderful, i thought June would have done what her husband wanted in the end - the perfect home and meal - i like this ending a lot more!!!