The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Great story. Well done.
05/26/06
Loved it! I knew she'd be doing something at the end, to embarase him, but it would work to his advantage, but wasn't sure what it would be. Great!
05/27/06
Well written, I like the use of his tie to show the intensity of his feelings. Great job!
05/29/06
You definitely know how to spin an enjoyable yarn! This is a delightful piece of writing, creatively and technically, and you are certainly destined for higher levels. Thank you!
06/01/06
Congratulations, Emma! I'm glad to see your entry up in lights!
Congratulations, Emma, on your win! What a delightful story. I could hear June and her marching band and smiled as I saw the fun through the eyes of the children. Great job!
06/06/06
This was wonderful, i thought June would have done what her husband wanted in the end - the perfect home and meal - i like this ending a lot more!!!