The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely progression. Good work.
I'm not usually big on poetry, but you do an excellent job here.

I really like the last six or seven stanzas, being hesitant, etc.

Great visual effect throughout your work. Nicely done.
WOW. Amazing work! I'm extremely impressed. With your talent you won't be in beginners very long. Great message, great poetic flow. GREAT JOB!!!!
Congratulations on your win, Beth. Well done. I felt the sun and sand and heard what you heard as I read. I like the reality that you wove into your piece. As people we often hesitate. Thankfully, our God is faithful and reaches into our "space" inspite of our hesitations.
I really like this! I could see and feel everything perfectly! Great word choices! Congratulations on your win!