The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Power of prayer is amazing. I see a good article needing a bit of refinement on grammar. But overall I like this.
I like this concept a lot. You're passion comes through your words.

I would've liked to have seen the characters come alive more, either through dialogue or perhaps changing to first person (one of the nurses, or even the prostitute).

Nice work. Keep writing.
Very good. Very well written. Thank you for caring enough to write about people that God won't forget and need our love and care too. Keep writing. Your heart comes through.
05/31/06
I really like the title, joy often comes in 'Strange Wrappers.' Joy also comes in the power of prayer. Good job!