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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Joy (05/18/06)

TITLE: The Joy Has Come
By Tyrone Short
05/23/06


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The joy comes when you feel His presence in the morning
The joy comes when you desire your anointed calling

The joy comes when He gives you the desire of your heart
The joy comes when you love Him too much to stay apart

The joy comes when He reveals to you prosperous truth
The joy comes when you overcome the sin of your youth

The joy comes when He gives you that peace that makes you cry
The joy comes when you recognize that you are the apple of His eye

The joy comes when He relays through a soft gentle whisper His love
The joy comes when you give all you have below to Him who is above

It is a joy that is undefined
It is a joy that gives you a peace of mind

It is a joy that embraces your soul
It is a joy that lets you know…

That the joy has come


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Sue Dent05/27/06
Beutiful way to show joy! My only suggestion would be to minimize the number of times you use "The joy comes when" so things don't look so cluttered. Other than that, I liked this!
Valerie Routhieaux05/31/06
I have to agree. You did a good job, but you could have said a few less 'Joy comes when'


   
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