The Official Writing Challenge
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This is truly creative. Great job.
Great story!
The Truth sets us free indeed! Well drawn fear parameter.
Ha ha! A humourous take on the topic - with a great message!

Watch for little sentences that "tell" too much (ie. "Since Fred died, I have to work to support our four children." - would someone really say that to a close friend? Wouldn't the friend know those details already?) - now that's a nitpicky thing, so don't stress about it. Just one way to keep honing that skill - and there is definitely skill here. Good job!
Very good. Good use of dialog. You have lots of great potential. Don't stop writing
This is so cute and very believable. Post-it notes and the floating of Dove soap bars were both mistakes. You've gone a good job here, a very pleasant, fun read.