The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
This is truly creative. Great job.
05/25/06
Great story!
05/26/06
The Truth sets us free indeed! Well drawn fear parameter.
05/27/06
Ha ha! A humourous take on the topic - with a great message!

Watch for little sentences that "tell" too much (ie. "Since Fred died, I have to work to support our four children." - would someone really say that to a close friend? Wouldn't the friend know those details already?) - now that's a nitpicky thing, so don't stress about it. Just one way to keep honing that skill - and there is definitely skill here. Good job!
Very good. Good use of dialog. You have lots of great potential. Don't stop writing
06/02/06
This is so cute and very believable. Post-it notes and the floating of Dove soap bars were both mistakes. You've gone a good job here, a very pleasant, fun read.