The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Very well done. And I like how you left us hanging at the end but with enough hope that we can guess what is going to happen.
05/25/06
I like the ending, too--Good job!
05/26/06
This is really well done, an enjoyable and believable read. Nice job :)
05/26/06
The title says it all! Fantastic!
05/27/06
I can't believe this is a "beginners" entry. You did everything right - great pace, realistic characters and dialogue, perfect ending! The only little thing I can pick on is that "phenomena" is actually the plural form of "phenomenon". But that's such a minor detail. This piece is absolutely fabulous!
05/30/06
Through my many years of depression, I could have used that "joy" from the Lord. Now that I know Him, I can relate! Very nice writing. Keep moving that pen. Blessings.