The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Very cute! Good flow, reads well, and has a nice message. Joy is there for us everyday - will we accept it and its giver? :)
05/30/06
Lovely story. I like the blending of the spiritual J O Y and the material joy. You told this episode in a very enchanting way.
05/31/06
While reading your wonderful entry, here, it struck me how we sometimes feel guilty about being joyful, when we know that others around us are suffering. Here, your narrator demonstrated a brilliant way to share "JOY" rather than trying to hide it under a bushel. I am impressed with your creativity and talent both in writing and in living "joy." God bless you, and I thank you!