The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Very nice. I loved the truth of this line especially: "Our level of joy is dependent upon our abiding or staying connected to our savior. " (capitalize "Saviour"). The relationship between dying to self and joy is a truth that needs repeating. Thanks.
Very nice!
05/28/06
This piece would be stronger without the first three paragraphs. You have plenty of substance to work with. Excellent thoughts.
I like this, especially the last paragraph. You've said so much there - wonderful lesson.
06/01/06
I agree with the above comments. Also, don't worry Patti, joy comes in the morning.!!!!!