The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Some wonderful lines in your poem. You broke the pattern with a line that began "From your arms". Had it been a last line I think that would have been OK but not in the middle.
05/27/06
In His arms! Joy indeed! Good job!
05/30/06
Very nicely constructed with a beautiful message of true joy! Keep writing.