The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Wonderful testimony and I love the title.
05/25/06
That makes her a sister twice over!

It helps to break up the writing a bit and make it easier on the eye if you leave a clear line between each paragraph.
05/25/06
Oh, is there any other Joy that exceeds the joy of seeing someone recieving Christ!

Atleast this inspired my heart to praise Him for His goodness in peoples lives!

I guess, spacing it out a little would have made it easier to read (someone kindly pointed that out to me as well).
Well, done, keep it coming!
Blessings,
Lily
05/26/06
I'm assuming from the way the story is written you are around 15-16 year old. You have a whole lifetime of touching others for God. Good story. I'll be praying for your parents. God bless both of you.
05/26/06
Good job! The greatest joy, receiving Christ. You blessed me with this story.
What a beautiful account. I love reading testimonies. Incredible.