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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Joy (05/18/06)

TITLE: Inexpressible Happiness
By Shannon Parker
05/18/06


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Wow! What a feeling? It started in my heart, then it just came out through my mouth! I received it in, what appeared to be, the most weakest point in my life. Laughter! Tears! Every emotion running wild! He came into my life. Not forcefully, but because I was willing. He (Jesus) came into my life and now I have joy inexpressible! A happiness in times of trouble, or despair. When the storms come, I know that His joy is my strength. What is His joy? His joy is this sense of peace that you receive in times when you, in the natural, feel as if you should be distressed. It is the laughter that spills when there is no use in crying! It is the feeling you have when you have done something that you know He would have done. When you close your eyes and you imagine Him smiling down at you, because this is His work. This is His service. His joy is your strength! This happiness you feel in serving the one who created you! The emotion that pours forth when you have your first child, and you gaze into their eyes, and you realize; this is how He must have felt when I became His servant and stepped into His plan for my life! This is true joy! This is the only way to inexpressible happiness! This is true joy!


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Lynda Schultz 05/25/06
Lovely little bit short, sweet and full of truth. Blessings.
Rita Garcia05/25/06
True joy indeed!! Good job!
Jessica Schmit05/27/06
Yeah! What an exciting piece. Full of the true source of joy. Great work! Try to break up the piece into smaller pieces so it can be read easier. Great job!
Becky Depp 05/27/06
I agree with the above comments, this should be broken up so it is easier to understand and its a bit short.

Other than that, Great Job!
Dana Cooper05/28/06
Lots of excitement came through in this piece.Its good read.Consider a grammer
checker.I have the same problem and its helping me alot.