The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Lovely little bit short, sweet and full of truth. Blessings.
05/25/06
True joy indeed!! Good job!
Yeah! What an exciting piece. Full of the true source of joy. Great work! Try to break up the piece into smaller pieces so it can be read easier. Great job!
05/27/06
I agree with the above comments, this should be broken up so it is easier to understand and its a bit short.

Other than that, Great Job!
05/28/06
Lots of excitement came through in this piece.Its good read.Consider a grammer
checker.I have the same problem and its helping me alot.