The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
The only thing I would recommend for this sermonette (which is well done) is a parable-illustration to introduce your reader to your topic and grab their interest. People actually learn more from stories than we may realize. God bless your writing!
05/22/06
You've picked just the right Scriptures to make your point. Great Bible study! I'd urge you to not begin with a definition, and to include some real-life applications--search for ways to give your piece some additional "zip" to increase your readership.
05/23/06
This would make a great devotional. Good thoughts, but try not to sound like a dictionary at the beginnging. I love the scripture verses and examples. They tie it all together :)