The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Nicely done, and the message is entirely appropriate for all of us — SLOW DOWN, AND LIVE doesn't only apply to driving at the speed limit.
05/22/06
This is a sweet little story. It lacks conflict, which is what will really hook your readers. Your old lady is a really endearing character.
05/23/06
A nice story of putting things in persepctive. Try breaking up the paragraphs, using a new one for each new speaker. Gppd descriptions (the smells, the dog, the flowers).