The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
A uniqe way to of dealing with the subject. Well done.
05/22/06
great story! it's at least top 10
05/22/06
A nice story...Cute and meaningful.
05/22/06
This is very cute. Work on eliminating a lot of your adjectives and adverbs, and finding strong verbs and nouns to replace them--it'll bump up the quality of your writing. I could really see these two very opposite girls, and you presented a valuable lesson.
05/23/06
Your characterisation of Prosperity works very well! And the contrast is a good idea, too.
05/24/06
Jan has some good pointers, but this is a very cute story. Thank you.
05/24/06
You've captured these teens' voices very well (Hmmm...I wonder why that is). Great story!