The Official Writing Challenge
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Sometimes the ideas weren't clear here; whether your life was hard and then you let God help? I know the intent of what you are talking about though and I agree! You have some great thoughts here and I think it has great potential.
It was a good effort here. I had a general sense of what you were writing, but the errors detracted a little from your piece. I've been writing for years, but I still have a dictionary close by. I hope to read more of your work in the near future. Keep it up!