The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
Your first sentence needs a bit of work, as it seems choppy. Otherwise, this is an interesting testimony. God bless you!
05/22/06
This is a moving testimony. You will increase your readership if you work a bit on the mechanics of writing--especially punctuation. Thank you for sharing this pivotal moment in your life!