The Official Writing Challenge
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Just love it. Fun and lighthearted, yet delivering an important message. Great work!
02/28/05
Excellent! The cute name of this drew me to read it. I can TOTALLY relate to this story!
Thank goodness Spree always wins! This week's challenge was definitely met. You let the reader in on a sneak preview of the battle we all do. Solid without being gooey!
03/02/05
You've got an awful lot of talent to be in the beginners' category...

Thanks for posting. A good read.
03/03/05
too good....for sure...this was excellent, I agree, doesn't read like beginner work to me.
Cute! I like your tongue in cheek approach, but please don't get discouraged. The key is that you are WRITING and submitting your work for others to review. That in itself is deserves a big KUDOS on your part. You are working on honing your craft. God may be the only one who knows where your writing will end up, but stay encouraged, my friend...and keep up the good work! (smile)
03/09/05
Cheri, thanks for the encouragement. Thanks for "letting God touch someone through (your) words."