The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
Here's an exercise to try: Put your message into the mouths of characters in a story. Create a little conflict, arguing the fine points, and see if this doesn't become a more enticing read. God bless your work!
05/22/06
I agree with Edy--there's nothing wrong with what you have here, but you want to draw in the maximum nuber of readers. To do that, you might also consider using specific life experiences to illustrate your point. Try something dramatic, something witty, something inspiring--give your piece some punch!
what a wodnerful devotional. Well thought out and written to the point. Excellent thoughts.