The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Cute take on prosperity. Nicely done :)
05/19/06
This is a clever story. God bless your writing.
05/22/06
Very cute allegory! I was reminded of "The Wizard of Oz"--pay no attention to that man behind the curtain...

A very satisfying read.
Ver very good job! Written extremely well. You pulled the reader in with your words a delievered a very important, creative and fun lesson. Great way of communicating a "harsh" point. Awesome. I really enjoyed this one!