The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
This is well done and humorous. Flows well, reads nice, and held my attention. Watch out for Peter!
05/18/06
Love that pig! I liked this picture especially: "So at this point, my wonderfully “smart” pig was wearing a blue and white blanket with his name on it, a couple helium balloons, and two pie plates." Watch your verb tenses. Good job.
05/19/06
You certainly are a good storyteller! What a charming little piggie!
05/22/06
Very nice piece. FOr the purposes of the challenge, I suspect that you didn't have enough of prosperity theme (despite the name of the show), but if you were aiming to entertain us all, you done good!
05/23/06
Lighthearted and delightful.
05/24/06
Wonderful humor. Brilliantly written.