The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
I always appreciate devotionals that begin with a story to illustrate the message (give the reader a little bait). Perhaps, begin with your own experience and then write about what it means to you. God bless you!
05/22/06
Great message! Try breaking it up a little with paragraphs and blank lines. And I agree - an illustration or two help a lot. Keep writing.
This is good writing. I agree some illustrations would help it. Overall, your style is good.
05/23/06
Rather than defining prosperity, consider showing us prosperity, by showing vignettes from your prosperous life--make your writing sparkle! You have good mastery of writing skills--time to break out and make it outstanding.