The Official Writing Challenge
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Technically your writing is good, but you could make it more appealing with a story to illustrate your message. I'd like to see your words as part of a dialog between characters in a story. God bless your work.
I have to dispute that Scripture can validly mean different things to different people, but other than that, I liked the message of this piece. I felt you covered a lot of ground, and perhaps the piece would benefit from being simplified - concentrate on Joseph, for instance, or on the Jeremiah passage. Keep writing!
When you began your essay with that fact that you've learned some lessons in recent years and months, I was expecting to read about how God has taught you these lessons--some life stories, which are nearly always interesting to read. Consider doing something like that for your next entry, and keep writing! There is lots of potential here.